Screenplay Treatment

Beginning:
The four criminals sit facing the front of the sedan as they hype themselves up and prepare to rob the bank. All of the criminals are armed, Three of them have a variety of pistols and  one of them has a assault rifle. The criminals disembark whilst cocking and holstering their weapons and job into the bank in a line, One of the criminals kicks open the door hitting a civilian knocking him unconscious.

Middle:
Two of the criminals gathers up a few hostages and proceed to place them a corner at gunpoint. The other two run behind the counter and begin opening the two tills containing a large sum of money. One of the Criminals opens the tills with ease yet the other criminal struggles and ends up getting annoyed and hitting the till with force causing vibrations to go through the crowbar and into his hands hurting him making him shout in pain. This is a big enough distraction to allow one of the hostages to make a run for the exit shouting for help. In the panic and confusion Charlie pulls out a suppressed pistol and shoots the woman in the back causing her to fall down injured. Screaming and shouting can be heard outside the bank asking for 'help' and for someone to call the police. The crew then realize that they do not have enough time to get all of the money and make a safe and clean get away, this is reinforced further by the crew arguing causing more time to be wasted.

Ending:
The crew bicker ether to get the last safe open but they then come to the agreement that they need to take a hostage with them as insurance so that they can get away. During this the police arrive outside the Bank and point their weapons at the bank entrance as one of the police chief tells the crew to release all of the hostages and they will not fire at them , this is done over the tannoy located on the top of one of the police cars. The crew walk out one behind another pointing their guns towards the police cars showing that they're armed. As Felix looks around he sees a glint coming from a window of a chemists located across the road of the bank. After Felix spots the glint a loud bang is heard as Edgar topples down to the ground along with his rifle. Charlie and Cecil return fire shooting their pistols in quick succession at the police. The hostage sprints away to the police who open fire at the criminals with overpowering amount of gunfire. As the criminals dive down to the armored sedan Felix grab the assault rifle and get to work on finding where that sniper was hidden of which was still located in the window of the chemists. Felix goes prone and aims the assault rifle at the window only for the sniper to fire at Felix causing him to flinch and to hold down the trigger, lighting the window up with gunfire hitting the sniper in chest and rifle knocking him down and breaking his rifle. Almost simultaneously a SWAT team member runs up to the car and points a shot gun at the crew. A gunshot is heard from behind the Crew as the SWAT member falls down as Edgar drags himself to the Swat Member and proceeds to pull a flash bang grenade and a single fragmentation grenade from the vest of the injured swat member.